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Expert Help with Your Agent Submission Package

My very first mentoring client secured a literary agent at a top agency after working with me.

Get expert guidance on your query letter, synopsis, and opening chapters from a published author who knows what agents want right now.

Who This Is For

Your manuscript is ready. Now comes the part that stops most writers in their tracks: writing a query letter, a synopsis, and preparing to send your work out into the world.

Sending your work to agents or publishers is a time-consuming process and can be an anxious time, waiting for feedback. If you feel you want some guidance before submission or even once you’ve had some rejections and you’re not sure how to proceed, then this package could work well for you.

What the package covers

The Agent/Publisher Submission Package for £350* is specifically designed for writers who are ready to submit. Here is what is included:

  • I read the opening 10,000 words of your novel, your query letter, and your 1-to-2-page synopsis.
  • I then write you a detailed report with specific advice on what is working well and what needs to be strengthened to capture an agent’s attention.
  • We have a one hour video call

I can also offer a bespoke package if you want additional support, for example, a further read after you have revised, or further video sessions. Get in touch and I will put together a tailored quote.

Why This Matters

Agents receive hundreds of submissions every week. The query letter, synopsis and opening chapters are your only chance to make them want to read further. 

Why Choose Me

  • My very first mentoring client secured representation at a top literary agency after working with me on her submission package.
  • I am represented by United Agents and have industry-based knowledge of what agents are looking for.
  • I mentor writers for Curtis Brown, Writers & Artists and others.
  • I am traditionally published by HarperCollins, Hodder & Stoughton, Headline, Bonnier Zaffre and SpellBound Books across four pen names.
  • I work with most fiction genres, including crime, thriller, fantasy, romantasy, women’s fiction, historical fiction, domestic noir, science fiction, saga, romance, and literary fiction.

Testimonials

“I couldn’t have secured an agent without Becca’s help. She was instrumental in both supporting me as I created my best work and in helping me put together a successful package. Prior to working with Becca I had done professional courses on agent submission packages and paid for agent one-to-ones. I am in no doubt that her experience secured me an agent at a top agency.” –  Lauren-Jane B

“Becca’s insight hugely impacted my second draft, offering direction into how to enhance character and improve structure. Her ability to quickly ingest your work and have an immediate, deep comprehension of the themes is highly impressive.” – Christopher C

“Becca provided me with honest, helpful feedback, and her quick, clear communication kept everything running smoothly from start to finish. Her thoughtful critique and practical suggestions were exactly what I needed, and I’d recommend her to any writer looking to grow.” – Keeley F.

How To Get Started

  1. Get in touch via the contact form and tell me about your novel and where you are in the submission process.
  2. I will come back to you to discuss the package and arrange next steps.
  3. Once agreed, send me your opening 10,000 words, your query letter, and your synopsis in Word format.
  4. I will send you your report and we’ll arrange your video meeting.
*This price is a guideline only. After I receive the sample of your work, I will email you with the price for providing the services which will be determined by a range of factors including taking into account the amount of time that will be involved in providing the editorial service.
Please read the full list of Terms and Conditions. By proceeding with any purchase of any service on this site, you are declaring that you agree to them in full.

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