Writing a novel or short story or thinking about starting to write?
Want to submit to agents or publishers?
Looking for an inspiring book coach who knows the publishing world inside out?
Whatever stage you’re at, I can help. I offer a range of packages for writers to provide support with their writing journey.

Why me?
- I’ve been a published novelist for years and write books in a range of genres.
- I’ve also been a teacher of writing for decades.
Look at my profile
to see why I can help you as your book coach.
PACKAGES:
[1]
STARTER PACKAGE
1-hour video session
+
reading up to 5k words
+
1k-word report
= £200*

[2]
AGENT or PUBLISHER SUBMISSION PACKAGE
Read opening 10k words of your novel
+
read your query letter & synopsis
+
2k-word report
= £350*

[3]
VIDEO MEETINGS
We meet to discuss your work, plan your novel, discuss how to submit to agents etc.
= £100* per hour

[4]
CREATE YOUR OWN BESPOKE PACKAGE
READING YOUR WORK
I read an extract from your work, a short story, a synopsis of your novel etc.
&
WRITING REPORTS
I offer written reports up to max 4k words.
&
VIDEO MEETINGS
We meet to discuss your writing.
FAQs
What’s the Starter Package all about?
Investing in your writing can be daunting, so I offer an introductory package where I can read an extract of a novel/novella or a full short story or even a synopsis of your novel (all up to 5k words), write you a short report & then we can meet virtually to discuss your work. In this way, you can get some professional feedback on your writing for a smaller initial cost. If you feel you want more mentoring, then we can move on to other packages. However, you don’t have to begin with the Starter Package – you can decide how much help you need and create your own bespoke package from the services available from the beginning.
What’s the Agent/Publisher Submission Package all about?
Sending your work to agents or publishers is a time-consuming process and can be an anxious time, waiting for feedback. If you feel you want some guidance before submission or even once you’ve had some rejections and you’re not sure how to proceed, then this package could work well for you. I will read your whole submission i.e. usually the opening 10k words, your query letter & synopsis. I’ll then write you a 2k-word report with advice on what I feel is working well and what I feel could be changed, in order to grab an agent or publisher’s attention. This will be based on my professional experience and opinion. If you want an additional video call to discuss the report, let me know & I’ll offer a quote.
How does the Bespoke Package work?
Mentoring means something different to every writer. You might want to meet virtually for 1 hour once a month for 6 months & have me read extracts too. You might want a one-off 2-hour video meeting to discuss the structure of your novel. You might want me to read your 35k-word novella and write a 2k-word report. For the bespoke package, tell me what mixture of services you want, we’ll agree the length of extracts, meetings and reports in advance and I’ll quote you. The longer or more extensive package you need, I often offer decent discounts, so contact me for a quote.
What kind of things will we discuss in the video sessions?
We can discuss whatever it is about your writing that you feel you want help with e.g. planning a novel, researching for a novel, drafting & re-drafting, extracts of your writing, how to prepare a submission package for an agent or publisher, what to expect from the publishing process…and more! We can agree before the session what you want to cover.
What sort of things do you write about in your reports?
When I’m reading your work, I’ll be looking at whatever you’ve asked me to focus on, as well as my own thoughts on the readability of your work and how it works as a whole. Beyond that, if you intend to submit for publication, I’ll also be considering what agents and publishers might be looking for in the current publishing world and how well I think your work might fit with that. I’ll be offering you my opinion and my advice based on my experience. It’s up to you if you agree or not!
I’ve written a full novel and need you to read the whole thing. Which service should I pick?
Go to my Manuscript Editing page and see my full manuscript services there. I offer both a manuscript read and different levels of detail in my assessment.
Do you have a list of Terms and Conditions for using the services on this site?
Yes. They give more details on each service. Please read the full list of Terms and Conditions. By proceeding with any purchase of any service on this site, you are declaring that you agree to them in full.

Anything else
you want to know about
how I can help you as your book coach,
just get in touch.

*These prices are guidelines only. After I receive the sample of your work, I will email you with the price for providing the services which will be determined by a range of factors, including taking into account the amount of time that will be involved in providing the mentoring service.
(Author photo in black & white by Emma Shardlow Hudson)
